Draupadi's Choice
Author's Note. This week, we began reading the great Indian epic, Mahabharata. I am already quite familiar with this epic so it was nice to refresh my mind on some of the smaller details. Since I was younger, I was always intrigued by how Draupadi was married to five guys. As a kid, you see your mom and dad married to each other and that's it, no other wives/husbands in the mix. So to hear about this story where a woman has five husbands is always interesting. This week I decided to write my story based on Draupadi's Swayamwara. I decided to make my story into a Screenplay because I felt that this scene would be perfect to act out. To change it up, I decided to let Draupadi make a decision about who she gets to marry, rather than her having five husbands.
KUNTI, wife of King Pandu, mother of Yudhishthira, Bhimasena, and Arjuna
YUDHISHTHIRA, eldest Pandava brother, name means one who is steadfast even during war, son of Kunti and Dharma
BHIMASENA, second Pandava brother, name means "of terrible might", son of Kunti and Vayu
ARJUNA, third Pandava brother, name means "of stainless deeds", son of Kunti and Indra
NAKULA, fourth Pandava brother, name means "the charming one", son of Madri and Nasatya
SAHADEVA, youngest Pandava brother, name means "equal to a thousand gods", son of Madri and Nasatya
KING DRUPADA, king of Panchala
DRAUPADI, "fire born" daughter of Drupada, wife of the Pandava brothers
FADE IN
In the kingdom of Panchala, a swayamwara for King Drupada's beloved daughter is to be held. The regents and princes from all over were invited to take part in this challenge to win Draupadi's hand in marriage.
KING DRUPADA [to himself]: I need to set up the perfect challenge so that only the greatest of men can marry my beautiful Draupadi. I must make a bow and arrow shooting challenge. But this won't be any ordinary bow, it will be such a powerful bow that only a very strong gentleman could bend and string it. But that will not cut it. Let me make this even more difficult. After all, whoever wins this challenge gets my lovely daughter in return. Here, let's add a spinning wheel that the arrow must go through. Oh, but not only that, the man who wins my daughter must have terrific aim. He will have to get the arrow through the wheel and also shoot this here golden fish. Whoever can do all of this will marry Draupadi. Ah, yes! This is the perfect swayamwara. Ha ha! Now my daughter will have the best husband.
DRAUPADI: Oh father, what a challenge you have made! I am doubtful that any man can stand up to this mighty swayamwara.
KING DRUPADA: Draupadi, the perfect man will come and win you. I am sure of it.
[to himself]: Oh how I hope the mighty Arjuna will attend and complete my challenge. In my eyes, he is the best man for Draupadi.
The swayamwara begins
KING DRUPADA: Come all might men who desire to marry my Draupadi! We shall see who is strong enough to bend and string this here bow.
NARRATOR: Many men stepped up to the bow and attempted to lift it. One by one, they failed. Some were able to lift the powerful bow, but none were able to string it. Suddenly, Arjuna comes up to the bow.
ARJUNA [dressed as a brahmin]: Here, let me attempt this.
NARRATOR: Arjuna is able to lift and string the bow with ease. In one swift movement, he shoots the arrow, it goes through the wheel, and hits the golden fish.
CROWD: Oh my! Who is this brahmin who was able to string the bow?
DRAUPADI [running up to Arjuna]: You have done it! Finally, a man strong enough to complete my father's challenge. I am so excited!
[pauses] Wait! I know you, you are that Pandava, Arjuna. My father is always talking about you. I'm sure he is very happy that you have succeeded in completing his challenge.
(Draupadi's Swayamwara. Source: Wikimedia Commons)
The Pandavas and Draupadi go back home
KUNTI: I have heard of the wonderful feat you have accomplished, Arjuna! You have brought great honor to the Pandava name, but also, you have gifted yourself and each of your brothers a beautiful wife.
ARJUNA: What? What do you mean I have gifted my brothers with a wife? I have won Draupadi fair and square. None of the others stepped up and tried to string the bow. I am the rightful winnter.
KUNTI: But it is written that she will marry you all. It must be done this way, son.
ARJUNA: No, mother, I do not like this.
YUDHISHTHIRA: Mother, how is this fair to anyone? Arjuna has won Draupadi fair and square.
BHIMASENA: Well, shoot! I don't mind sharing Draupadi. I mean, look how beautiful she is. Brothers, let's marry her.
NAKULA: Bhima, what the heck? Are you crazy? Draupadi is a person just like us. She should have a say in her future. Let her pick who she wants to marry.
ARJUNA: What do you mean, "let her pick?" Nakula, I was the one who completed the challenge. I get to marry her.
DRAUPADI: Arjuna, as happy as I am that you won, I agree with Bhimasena. I feel like I should have a say in who I marry. I do not want to be married to five men, especially five brothers. That does not seem like a good future to me. Please allow me to choose.
ARJUNA: I guess you are right. Please, tell us Pandavas who you have in mind to be your husband.
DRAUPADI: Thank you, Arjuna, for understanding. I would like to marry your younger brother, Nakula. He is the only one who acknowledged my choice in this matter. He seems to be the most genuine of the Pandava men. I will be happy to marry Nakula.
NAKULA: Oh dear Draupadi, I am humbled by your decision. Let us get married at once.
NARRATOR: Looks like Draupadi made a surprising decision in the end. I guess Nakula was able to live up to his name, "the charming one."
FADE OUT
Bibliography. PDE Mahabharata. Part B. Section 26-27. Various authors.
Roshni,
ReplyDeleteFirst, I would like to say that knowing the Mahabharata before the beginning of this class is an unfair advantage. I also felt that the story of Draupadi put an interesting twist on the usual kinds of marriages you see in epic stories like these. If anything, it's usually one husband with five wives. Thanks for sharing, I look forward to more.
Andrew
Hi Roshni!
ReplyDeleteHow awesome that you are familiar with all the great stories we are now reading! I like how you set up a helpful index at the top to explain some of the details like the meaning of the names. I also thought it was neat that you put the author's note at the top, I usually always have mine at the bottom. It was neat to see how the placement of the note can have an impact on the reading.
Your background is neat. I had not seen one like it before. I did not see anything in your story to impede the flow or distract with errors. You did a great job of retelling the story! I too find it interesting to think about how one woman could be a wife to five husbands. It's a great plot for a good story!
Hey Roshni!
ReplyDeleteI think it is so cool that you are able to find a different perspective on stories that you already know and have grown up with. It must be fun for you to find the different ways for you to twist and retell these stories.
I think that this is a really great example of you putting your own twist on things and I thought it was very enjoyable to read.
Hi again Roshni, I thought the best part of your story was your dialogue. I actually just used dialogue in one of my storytelling posts. I think it is a good to use dialogue in a story. It sets up the story well and gives more details of the characters but also gives the reader an idea of the setting and plot. Great job.
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