The Four Friends
It was a warm autumn afternoon in Tulsa, Oklahoma. Bhakti, Kapil, Vidya, and Suraj were walking back from school. The seventh grade had just started two weeks ago and the four friends still couldn't believe summer was over. On their walk home, the kids talked about what they missed most about summer. Kapil and Suraj's families went on a cruise together and all the boys could talk about was their time on the ship. Vidya went on and on about the youth camp she was at for one month. Bhakti just listened to her friends talk about their fun adventures because she stayed in Tulsa all summer.
When they arrived at their neighborhood, Kapil invited everyone to come over to his house. This was their tradition everyday after school. One of the four friends would invite everyone to their respective house and the kids would hang out and do homework until they went home for dinner. Kapil informed his friends that his grandparents were visiting from India and they always had a lot to talk about. Kapil's grandparents taught him a lot about the Hindu religion and he was excited for his friends to listen.
When the kids walked into Kapil's house, his grandpa was the first to see them. He advised them to take off their shoes before entering any further into the house. This is a respectful gesture that many Indian families do. Bhakti, Vidya, and Suraj realized that their parents did take their shoes off before entering the house, but they never forced the kids to do it. They liked that Kapil's grandpa told them to do this. The kids could tell that they were going to enjoy talking to him.
Bhakti, Kapil, Vidya, and Suraj went to the dining room where Kapil's grandma left some snacks and juice. The kids sat at the table and waited for Kapil's grandpa to start telling them something cool about Hinduism. His grandpa came and started by asking them if they know anything about the old Indian caste system. All of the kids had puzzled looks on their faces. Kapil's grandpa was a little surprised, but he went on to explain to them how the caste system worked. He told them that the caste system basically put each individual into one of four different groups, based on their birth. A person's last name signified which group they were in.
Kapil's grandpa explained that the Brahmins were known to be religious, studious people and the Kshatriyas were rulers and warriors. He told them that the Vaishyas were merchants and farmers and the Shudras were the laborers and service providers. He also told them that this system was under a lot of scrutiny because it made some people look better than others. Kapil's grandpa even told them about the untouchable group and how they were the lowest of all.
The four friends were really intrigued by the concept of the caste system. They were talking about it all evening. Bhakti had this crazy thought that each of them could fit under one of the four groups. Bhakti pointed out that Kapil was the tough one of their group and he always protected his friends. Kapil would have been the perfect Kshatriya. Bhakti also noted that Suraj always did all the work during group projects, almost like a Shudra would do. Vidya was the perfect Vaishya because she was always trading things and doing business with people at school. Kapil let everyone know that Bhakti was the epitome of a Brahmin in that she loved school and always taught her friends concepts that only she understood.
(Brahmin man. Source: Wikimedia Commons)
At school that day, Bhakti noticed there was one boy in their class that no one ever talked to. She automatically thought about the caste system and how that boy would be looked at as an untouchable. She was unhappy with this thought and decided to go and talk to the boy. At lunch, she told her three friends about the boy. They all decided that the caste system was a good idea, but it shouldn't exclude people. After school, the kids decided to go back to Kapil's house and talk to his grandpa about what they discovered. Bhakti explained how each of the four of them had their perfect role in their clique, but how some people might feel left out, like an untouchable. The kids told Kapil's grandpa about how they wished the untouchable group didn't exist.
This is when Kapil's grandpa told them that the ideas of the caste system are not really in place anymore today. He told them that he was proud of them for deeply thinking about what he told them. Bhakti, Kapil, Vidya, and Suraj thanked him for introducing them to something they had never heard of before. The kids told Kapil that they would definitely be back at his house again to learn more from his grandpa.
Author's Note. I very loosely based this story off of the section in the Mahabharata when Hanuman and his half-brother Bhima met up. In this section, Hanuman give his half-brother a brief overview of what he has done in regards to his adventures with Rama. Hanuman ends up telling Bhima about the different ages of humanity and how the idea of the caste system came about in the third age, called the Dwapara Yuga. In this age, all actions were based upon the caste system and each individual's specific role in society. I got inspiration from my story from the idea of the caste system. I wanted to explain the system a little. I also wanted to touch on why it isn't in use anymore.
Bibliography. PDE Mahabharata. Part C. Section 46. Various authors.
Roshni, this was a great story for many reasons. First, you did a great job of explaining the caste system, so that anyone who is unfamiliar with it could easily understand it. Second, your story included a useful moral of inclusion and empathy. Finally, you created several unique characters that you were able to bring to life. This was especially apparent in the way you classified each character based on their personality. At first, I wasn't sure what story you based this off of, but I understood your goal with the story after reading your author's note. I think you did an excellent job of building a story from one simple element in the Mahabharata.
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ReplyDeleteWow! While reading some of the Indian literature I had come across ideas of the caste system, but your story really explained it so well! I absolutely love how you have the four friends identify themselves as a different caste depending on their personalities. Including the “untouchable” boy was a very nice addition – I loved how the four kids didn’t want to exclude anyone. I think you did such a good job on explaining the system, and also why it shouldn’t be used anymore!
Roshni,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job on this story. I really liked that you gave a history about the caste system. I was only vaguely familiar with what it was actually about, but your story gave me a more thorough explanation of what it actually was. I also liked how you had the children think about it and weigh the pros and cons of the caste system. I really enjoyed this story. Good job!
Roshni, I love how you set this story in Oklahoma. You did a good job with the grandparents too – it really fits the “Oklahoma” theme with the snacks and juice. So cute! I love the idea of explaining the caste system and its origin; I feel like this is a lot like my storybook where I use a father and son to explain the idea of karma. Check it out at https://sites.google.com/site/kurmaandkarma/
ReplyDeleteThis was a fun way to describe the different parts of the caste system and how they worked back then but still have a place today as well. Using Kapil's grandfather as the one who explained the system made it more believable since it was coming from someone older and wiser. My favorite part was that while the children were able to see the caste system's application to life today, it was flawed in was that is ostracized people. It just proves that while some things do hold true throughout time, other rules can be dated and need to be adaptable as society grows and develops. Great work!
ReplyDeleteHi Roshni, I thought you did a good job in your storytelling post for Week 6. I also think that you incorporated the characters well in your story and you did a great job describing them. I also think that you had a great plot compared to the original story. Keep up the good work and I will enjoy seeing the rest of your stories.
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