How Rama Won Sita
It was a chilly Saturday evening at Hogwarts School of
Witchcraft and Wizardry. All of the students were in their respective houses’
common rooms. The ladies of Gryffindor were all sitting together in front of
the fireplace. There was a dim glow in the room from the bright orange flame
that Ginny conjured up. Hermoine Granger and Lavender Brown were taking up the
seats on the couch. Standing in front of the fireplace were the twin sisters,
Padma and Parvati Patil. Tonight, the girls decided to tell stories of their
native countries. The Patil sisters decided to talk about the Ramayana.
(Gryffindor common room. Source: Wikimedia Commons)
Padma explained to her peers that the Ramayana was an epic
Sanskrit poem that was written by the Hindu sage, Valmiki. The Ramayana is one
of the most well-known epics of India. The Ramayana tells the story of Rama,
the seventh avatar of Lord Vishnu, and how he goes about trying to save his
wife, Sita. Sita was abducted by the evil king of Ayodhya, Ravana. At this
point, Parvati cuts in and corrects Padma. “Ravana was the evil king of Lanka,
Padma. You should know this by now. Mom and Dad would be so disappointed in
you.” All the girls laughed at Padma’s expense. “Anyway, as I was saying, Sita
was abducted. But girls, we want to tell you how cute Rama and Sita’s love
story was,” Padma announced. All the girls were particularly intrigued at this
point and couldn’t wait for the Patil sisters to tell them the story.
Parvati began by explaining to the girls that Sita’s father
was Janaka, King of Mithila, and he set up a challenge for any guy that wanted
to pursue his daughter. There was this mighty bow that was in Janaka’s
possession. Many warriors and rajas tried to bend the bow, but their attempts
were unsuccessful. Janaka claimed that whoever was able to bend the bow would
be able to have Sita’s hand in marriage. This feat seemed next to impossible for
every guy that showed up for Sita. Janaka began to think that know one was worthy
of marrying his beautiful daughter, Sita. Then, suddenly, Rama comes in. With
respect, Rama asks Janaka if he may lift and bend the mighty bow. “Guys, OMG,
this is the best part. Listen up!” exclaimed Padma.
(Rama breaks the mighty bow. Source: Wikimedia Commons)
Parvati goes on to tell the girls the rest of the story. She
excitedly tells them how Rama lifted up the bow with great ease, like lifting
up a feather. With almost no force at all, Rama was able to bend the mighty
bow. She made sure to tell them that before the competition started, Rama and Sita laid eyes on each other in the garden and instantly fell in love. Padma buts in and says, “Janaka was extremely impressed by Rama’s success
and almost instantly accepted Rama as his Sita’s husband.”
“Aww, that was quite possible the coolest way to win someone
over,” Lavender whispered. All the girls were intrigued by the story. They
couldn’t wait til the Patil sisters gave another installment of the epic love
story, Ramayana.
Author's Note. I decided to write about when Rama wins Sita. I remained very close to the actual story of when Rama broke the bow. I have always loved this story of how Rama was the only raja who was able to lift and break the mighty bow of Lord Shiva. I touched on the part of the story before Rama wins over Sita through the competition. I briefly mentioned how Rama and Sita had already seen each other before the competition. But my spin on the story was to make it seem like Padma and Parvati Patil were telling the story to their friends at Hogwarts. I was browsing the random storytelling site generator and the Harry Potter style really stuck out to me. I have read and seen all the Harry Potter books and movies so it was easy for me to write a story based on the characters. I love Harry Potter so it was fun for me to incorporate it into the Ramayana. I obviously chose an image that showed Rama breaking the bow and surprising all of the bystanders. This was the climax of the story, in my opinion. I hope anyone who reads this enjoys the mix of the Patil sisters and the Ramayana. I wanted to write a fun, light-hearted story about Rama and Sita.
Bibliography. PDE Ramayana. Part A, Section 9-10. Various authors.
Hey Roshni! First off, I am a HUGE Harry Potter fan - so this type of storytelling is probably my favorite! I would have never thought to have arranged the story in such a creative way! Do you have a sibling - because the banter between the Patil sisters was SPOT ON! I wonder if Hermoine - being a very independent young lady - would have questioned why Sita's father made her marriage into a challenge for men.
ReplyDeleteRoshni, I too love Harry Potter; this was such a creative spin on the telling of Rama and Sita’s love story. I was lost at first when you were describing the setting as a Hogwart commons room but I immediately was intrigued when you began with the Patil sisters sharing the story of the Ramayana. The feel interruptions and quips here and there between the sisters was believable and reminded me of the true setting of where the story telling was taking place. Great work!
ReplyDeleteHi Roshni!
ReplyDeleteMuch like everyone else that has commented, I also love Harry Potter. I was not expecting that when I started reading your story. I love how you tied The Ramayana into Harry Potter by having the Patil sisters tell the story. You get all of the kudos by weaving one story massively important to one culture into another. Excellent read and I look forward to reading more of your works this semester! Great job!
Hi Roshni, I just wanted to start off by saying I am in so much awe that you did a mash up between Harry Potter and Ramayana. As a total HP fan you had my complete and total attention. If Hermoine and Lavender were in the same room not fighting I knew this had to be before the Half Blood Prince. I love the dynamic between the two Patil sisters. Especially, when Parvati tells Padma, “mom and dad would be so disappointed in you”. I wish you went into more detail about how much Rama and Sita were so in love and even though her father established this competition to win her hand in marriage, she already knew she wanted to be his wife. Also, I wish it was Lavender who said that would be the coolest way to win someone over for I cannot see Hermoine saying that, out loud at least. All in all, it was a very fun read and you wrote a story.
ReplyDeleteHi again Roshni! I did my storytelling about the first part of this when Rama first set his eyes on Sita but anyways; I have always like Harry Potter so this story was so cool to me. I like how you took characters from Harry Potter and put them in this story, very interesting how you thought of this. The ending was great, I thought that was the best part to me.
ReplyDeleteI like the style you chose to write in for this story. It was like a fairy tale inside of a fairy tale. I think it was a good idea to relate the story of the Ramayana (something that we are all probably just reading for the first time) and relating it to one of the most well known series of all time. You would be hard pressed to find someone who hasn't at least read or seen one of the Harry Potter books/movies, so it was a brilliant move on your part. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite aspect of your story was that you included it within Harry Potter in a manner that is actually quite sensible seeing as students gather at Hogwarts from around the world, each with their own culture. From your author's note it seems as though you have known about the story for some time now, when did you first hear about this tale?
ReplyDeleteRoshni,
ReplyDeleteYou truly captured the essence of teenage girls gathered together in a room as friends listening to a story about a timeless love. I liked how you incorporated Harry Potter into the story, which showed your creative side. I absolutely loved that you used the Patil sisters to tell the story, and how you depicted their sister-sister relationship as they began to tell the story. I immediately thought of Harry when he asked Padma to the Yule Ball. I’m surprised you did not have Hermonie asking a dozen questions at the end of the story. She’s such an inquisitive character no matter what a situation may be. I wish that you would have included more photos into your story and had gone into more detail about Rama and Sita’s story. You did a great job, and I enjoyed reading your story. I look forward to reading more of your stories throughout the semester.
Roshni, I really enjoyed reading your story! I am a huge fan of Harry Potter so I am glad that you included that in your plot. The break up of the story with the girls having dialogue is awesome. It really brings a great dynamic to the story. Overall, your take on the Ramayana with it being told as a story is great. I look forward to reading more for your stories.
ReplyDeleteOh my gosh, Roshni!
ReplyDeleteI love (love, love, love) that you used a Hogwarts theme to center your story around! I saw someone do this last semester when I took Myth/Folklore, and I think it is such a great, creative idea! I love that you sort of give some background on what the Ramayana is within your story—it fit so well with the storytelling style you’re using. This was really well done! Harry Potter for the win.